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Lesson 35. Objects in the Storyworld│The Mechanics of Fiction Writing
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Lesson 35. Objects in the Storyworld│The Mechanics of Fiction Writing

The Role of Objects in Storytelling

Importance of Objects in a Narrative

  • Objects are essential for creating a believable and immersive story world, serving both functional and decorative purposes.
  • Not all objects can be significant; only those that interact directly with the plot or contribute to character development should be highlighted.

Case Study: Jackson's Quest for Regalia

  • In Sherman Alexie's short story "What You Pawn I Will Redeem," the protagonist, Jackson, seeks his grandmother's powwow regalia from a pawn shop, illustrating how an object can drive the narrative.
  • Jackson’s emotional connection to the regalia is emphasized through his dialogue about its theft and family history, showcasing its significance beyond mere material value.

Symbolism and Meaning in Objects

  • The unique detail of a hidden yellow bead on the regalia adds authenticity and personal significance, enhancing reader engagement with the object.
  • Jackson's quest symbolizes broader themes of identity and belonging as he navigates challenges to reclaim what is rightfully his.

Another Example: The Egg Roll in "Defender of the Faith"

  • Philip Roth’s short story features Sergeant Marks' conflict with Private Grossbart over shared Jewish heritage, highlighting how objects can symbolize deeper interpersonal dynamics.
  • The egg roll given by Grossbart becomes a symbol of deceit rather than camaraderie, representing his manipulation of Marks for personal gain.

Conclusion: Multi-layered Meanings of Objects

  • Freud’s notion that “sometimes a cigar is just a cigar” parallels storytelling where objects often carry multiple meanings; here, the egg roll signifies betrayal rather than friendship.

Symbolism of Objects in Karen Russell's "St. Lucy's Home for Girls Raised by Wolves"

The Role of Shoes in Enculturation

  • In Karen Russell's short story, shoes symbolize the process of enculturation for the characters, particularly Claudette, who reflects on her own and others' shoes as they adapt to school life.
  • Claudette describes the disorientation she feels when wearing square-toed shoes instead of her natural four feet, emphasizing the strictures imposed by their new environment.
  • The mention of her sister Jeanette’s penny loafers highlights a deeper symbolic meaning; shoes represent cultural expectations and conformity as they transition from wildness to civilization.
  • As the girls learn proper posture and dance moves, shoes become emblematic of how culture constrains behavior and identity within this educational setting.

Reality Effects: Objects with No Deeper Meaning

  • Not all objects carry significant plot weight; sometimes an object serves merely to create a vivid image or lend authenticity to the narrative.
  • An example is given where a mother washes fruit while ignoring her child's lie, showcasing how mundane details like an apple can reflect character dynamics without deeper symbolism.
  • The curtains with blue teapots are described as reality effects—objects that do not contribute substantial meaning but enhance the scene's realism.

Importance of Descriptive Detail

  • Descriptions can vary from vague (like blue teapot curtains) to intricate (as seen in Melville’s cabin roof), affecting reader imagery and engagement with the text.
  • Objects central to plot or symbolism warrant mention; however, non-essential items can still enrich world-building if described thoughtfully.

Enhancing Story World Immersion

  • Strategic placement of reality effects helps create an immersive story world that feels authentic to readers through relatable details.
  • Simple objects can evoke specific imagery and emotions in readers when described effectively, enhancing their connection to the narrative.

Conclusion on Object Significance

  • While important objects should be highlighted for their roles in plot or symbolism, minor details can also contribute significantly to creating a vibrant story world.
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Some storyworld objects are too important to omit, others add an air of real-ness to the setting, others are best left to the reader's imagination. How should writers decide what objects are worth describing explicitly in their stories? We'll explore a few guidelines here. If you're interested in supporting this channel so I can continue to make videos like this one and others, please like, subscribe, and share with other writers. You can also help support the channel directly by visiting: https://www.rowelit.com/support The companion book for this series containing lecture notes and exercises is tailored to sharpen the skills covered in each lesson and is available through my online bookstore: https://www.amazon.com/author/p.e.rowe Purchasing a copy for yourself or a fellow writer helps to support this channel and your own writing skills.