Lesson 40. Connecting Clauses│The Mechanics of Fiction Writing

Lesson 40. Connecting Clauses│The Mechanics of Fiction Writing

Understanding Sentence Structure: Clauses and Their Connections

The Growth of Base Clauses

  • Sentences evolve from basic kernel structures into more complex forms, enhancing specificity and idea capacity.
  • This lesson focuses on how clauses connect and expand, akin to links in a chain.

Defining Clauses

  • A clause consists of a subject and predicate; however, a complete sentence must express a full thought.
  • Example: "Julia wondered." is a complete thought (independent clause), while "Who fell off the bed in the middle of the night?" is not (dependent clause).

Types of Clauses

  • Independent clauses can stand alone, while dependent clauses require additional information to form complete thoughts.
  • Example of elongating base clauses with dependent clauses: "David wanted to know more about the snowmobile for sale..." illustrates how additional details can be added.

The Complexity of Dependent Clauses

  • While it’s grammatically correct to string multiple dependent clauses together, excessive length can confuse readers.
  • Overly complex sentences may shift focus away from the main subject, leading to reader disengagement.

Effective Use of Dependent Clauses

  • Despite potential complexity, dependent clauses can provide valuable context and detail when used judiciously.
  • Example: "Last Thursday at midnight, Mario was present at the club..." shows how specific information enhances understanding without losing clarity.

Connecting Independent Clauses

Joining Independent Clauses

  • Independent clauses are capable of standing alone but often need punctuation like colons or semicolons for connection.

Semicolon Usage

  • Semicolons join closely related independent clauses. For example: “The doctor gave me some troubling news...; she wasn’t happy about my platelet counts being so low.”

Importance of Relatedness

  • When using semicolons, ensure that both independent clauses are closely related; otherwise, it results in non-sequitur constructions.

Colon Functionality

Understanding Colons and Semicolons in Writing

The Role of Colons

  • Kentucky is referred to as the horse capital of the world, with the Kentucky Derby being a highlight. The use of a colon can be validated by substituting it with "that is," which maintains clarity in the sentence structure.
  • The second clause following the colon provides an explanation for Kentucky's claim, demonstrating how colons can effectively link related ideas.

Distinguishing Between Colons and Semicolons

  • When two independent clauses are joined, a semicolon may be more appropriate than a colon if they do not directly explain each other.
  • It’s noted that only meticulous editors might catch errors between using colons and semicolons; practice is essential for mastering these punctuation marks.

Coordinating Conjunctions: A Versatile Tool

  • Using a comma with coordinating conjunctions (and, but, or, for, nor, so, yet) offers flexibility in connecting independent clauses. These conjunctions help convey additional information effectively.
  • Examples illustrate how coordinating conjunctions can add contrasting information or options within sentences while maintaining clarity.

Common Mistakes: Comma Splices

  • Writers often mistakenly use lesser words as coordinating conjunctions leading to comma splices or run-on sentences. Only the seven recognized coordinating conjunctions should connect independent clauses.
  • An example highlights how improper usage results in confusion; correcting it with proper punctuation clarifies thoughts for readers.

Importance of Proper Punctuation

  • Correct punctuation guides readers through complex ideas by marking complete thoughts and transitions between them. This enhances comprehension and keeps readers engaged throughout the text.