
Lesson 40. Connecting Clauses│The Mechanics of Fiction Writing
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Lesson 40. Connecting Clauses│The Mechanics of Fiction Writing
Understanding Sentence Structure: Clauses and Their Connections
The Growth of Base Clauses
- Sentences evolve from basic kernel structures into more complex forms, enhancing specificity and idea capacity.
- This lesson focuses on how clauses connect and expand, akin to links in a chain.
Defining Clauses
- A clause consists of a subject and predicate; however, a complete sentence must express a full thought.
- Example: "Julia wondered." is a complete thought (independent clause), while "Who fell off the bed in the middle of the night?" is not (dependent clause).
Types of Clauses
- Independent clauses can stand alone, while dependent clauses require additional information to form complete thoughts.
- Example of elongating base clauses with dependent clauses: "David wanted to know more about the snowmobile for sale..." illustrates how additional details can be added.
The Complexity of Dependent Clauses
- While it’s grammatically correct to string multiple dependent clauses together, excessive length can confuse readers.
- Overly complex sentences may shift focus away from the main subject, leading to reader disengagement.
Effective Use of Dependent Clauses
- Despite potential complexity, dependent clauses can provide valuable context and detail when used judiciously.
- Example: "Last Thursday at midnight, Mario was present at the club..." shows how specific information enhances understanding without losing clarity.
Connecting Independent Clauses
Joining Independent Clauses
- Independent clauses are capable of standing alone but often need punctuation like colons or semicolons for connection.
Semicolon Usage
- Semicolons join closely related independent clauses. For example: “The doctor gave me some troubling news...; she wasn’t happy about my platelet counts being so low.”
Importance of Relatedness
- When using semicolons, ensure that both independent clauses are closely related; otherwise, it results in non-sequitur constructions.
Colon Functionality
Understanding Colons and Semicolons in Writing
The Role of Colons
- Kentucky is referred to as the horse capital of the world, with the Kentucky Derby being a highlight. The use of a colon can be validated by substituting it with "that is," which maintains clarity in the sentence structure.
- The second clause following the colon provides an explanation for Kentucky's claim, demonstrating how colons can effectively link related ideas.
Distinguishing Between Colons and Semicolons
- When two independent clauses are joined, a semicolon may be more appropriate than a colon if they do not directly explain each other.
- It’s noted that only meticulous editors might catch errors between using colons and semicolons; practice is essential for mastering these punctuation marks.
Coordinating Conjunctions: A Versatile Tool
- Using a comma with coordinating conjunctions (and, but, or, for, nor, so, yet) offers flexibility in connecting independent clauses. These conjunctions help convey additional information effectively.
- Examples illustrate how coordinating conjunctions can add contrasting information or options within sentences while maintaining clarity.
Common Mistakes: Comma Splices
- Writers often mistakenly use lesser words as coordinating conjunctions leading to comma splices or run-on sentences. Only the seven recognized coordinating conjunctions should connect independent clauses.
- An example highlights how improper usage results in confusion; correcting it with proper punctuation clarifies thoughts for readers.
Importance of Proper Punctuation
- Correct punctuation guides readers through complex ideas by marking complete thoughts and transitions between them. This enhances comprehension and keeps readers engaged throughout the text.