How to Write a CONCLUSION with EXAMPLES: Essay Writing Tips
How to Write a Conclusion Paragraph
Introduction to Conclusion Paragraphs
- Jenna introduces the topic of writing conclusion paragraphs, emphasizing their importance in essays for academic and professional contexts.
- She outlines the structure of the video, which includes common mistakes to avoid and examples of effective conclusions.
Structure of a Conclusion Paragraph
- The conclusion is defined as the last paragraph of an essay, typically consisting of three to six sentences depending on essay length.
- Jenna compares a good conclusion to the ending of a movie, where readers should feel closure without new ideas introduced at the end.
Key Components of a Good Conclusion
- A strong conclusion involves two main tasks: restating the thesis in different words and summarizing key points from body paragraphs.
- For timed essays (e.g., TOEFL or IELTS), it’s acceptable to skip summarizing main points after restating the thesis.
Final Thoughts in Conclusions
- The final thought can take various forms:
- A prediction about future implications related to the topic.
- A call to action suggesting what readers should do next.
- A connection back to the hook used in the introduction.
Common Mistakes in Writing Conclusions
- Avoid copying and pasting sentences from earlier sections; instead, rephrase them concisely.
- Do not introduce new ideas that were not discussed in the essay; however, suggestions or calls to action are acceptable if they relate directly to previous content.
Examples of Poor Conclusions
- An example is provided where too many new ideas are introduced, leading to confusion rather than clarity.
- The writer attempts multiple suggestions for addressing shyness but overwhelms readers with information instead of providing concise advice.
Examples of Effective Conclusions
Example 1: Shyness Causes
- This conclusion effectively restates the thesis and summarizes key points before offering one clear suggestion regarding technology's impact on shyness.
Example 2: Undocumented Immigrants' Driver's Licenses
- The conclusion reiterates benefits while connecting back to an anecdote from earlier in the essay, creating a full-circle effect that enhances reader engagement.
Example 3: Changing Expectations of Marriage
- This conclusion succinctly summarizes changes in women's expectations regarding marriage while providing a brief prediction about future societal norms.
Closing Remarks
- Jenna encourages viewers with questions about writing conclusions and invites them to explore her other academic writing resources available on her channel.